Friday, March 29, 2013

Stephanie Leonard - Milestone 5 Sketches

These are my sketches for the character I'm turning in to the G.I.R.L. contest.  I think I'm going to render the final pose to completion along with a smaller portrait that shows her holding the mask, but if you have any feedback or advice, let me know.  Also, though this isn't technically for this class, I was wondering if you have any feedback on the environment:

I'm not sure how much more rendered I should make it.  Let me know if you have any thoughts :)


  1. (this is for your environment)

    I really like your color scheme, it feels very ethereal.

    here's a few of my thoughts you can take or leave:

    You may wanna take the contrast up a notch or two. You could also try putting some more color in your shadows and hardening/softening a few edges to make the image more dynamic. Consider blurring the forms in the background to give more overall depth in your perspective.

    It's looking very nice though, I think you're doing good work :)

  2. Thanks for the comment! I didn't have time to implement all of your suggestions, but they were really helpful, and I did what I could :)